The new cinema
In our town a new cinema has been opened. It is
located in a large shopping center. Thousands of people come to this center,
shop, eat and go to the cinema. All activities are in one place. This saves
time for people. When the parents shop, the children see movies in the cinema.
There is a good place for everyone. After the movie, they can talk with their
friends in a cafe. In our time the cinema is not a place where only films are
viewed. It also has a social and cultural side.
I think, the cinema in such place is a comfortable
place.
Efe Uslu
Generally speaking, the text is well-written. I think you should write more about the new cinema. That will be much better. Well-done.
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